18 Jan 2018

5SC#7-Karlee

Author: Karlee | Filed under: Uncategorized

There is a book shop.

There is many are books in the shop.

There is a little girl retining

the sun is sining on the shop.

 

Today is so suny.

One Response to “5SC#7-Karlee”

  1. Ms Summers Says:

    Karlee, you have obviously looked carefully at the picture to see that the sun is shining there – good work. I would love to have some adjectives used to describe the bookshop a little more to make the scene really ‘come alive’ for me. Keep up the good work.

Leave a Reply